Edurbf's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Desire]

-Constructive criticism, tips for next animations-
certain things are too slow, certain things too fast, try to balance.
think more clever ways to make things work, they are a tad bit obvious and/or weird.
improve fluidness of animation, in every situation. details make a masterpiece(should come naturally with practice)
But that's just my opinion as a viewer, I'm no animation master so... just do your best.

[Attack on Titan pivot]

"A squads first encounter with a titan, they don’t know the secret to killing one."
I'm pretty sure everyone gets lessons about a titan's weakness when they are in training (even more than the deadly weakness, minor ones like cutting the back of the feet to make the titan stop walking for a while) but that aside, resuming to the normal review.
The art style almost made me quit at first, but seeing the actual dynamics of battle and reactions characters had was interesting and made watching it worthwhile. You certainly would get 4 or 5 stars if you improved the art a little and also cared about details a little bit more.

[Pokemon - Truth Revealed]

Nice.
But I think it's a rather unplasant idea to eat venosaur meat since there are tauros and miltank pokemon(which look exatly like cattle) and a few varieties of fish.

Jonimator responds:

Aahh but a Venosaur's got the veggies and meat all in one! Less work for making burgers